Advantage - Me
Strip club bathroom - Night
A small, fat middle-aged man slumps on the back wall of a dirty bathroom while Kathy waits across the room to provide the services he’s already paid for. But he makes a phone call instead. Then he has Kathy lay her head on his chest and rub his feet with cold water from a dirty faucet. That’s all he wants.
Kyle V.O.: You know, It’s interesting how appearences can deceive. Not only appearences, but personalities. She came from my past - my long forgotten past - and she took hold of my thoughts with a word and a glance. I know she’s a boring waste of my time, and yet, something about her draws me to ask a question; an innocent question that I know she can’t ignore. I’m depending on her not to ignore it. Her conscience won’t let her ignore this question. Let her answer and let her open her heart to me once again. She was always easy that way. And I need someone easy right now.
Cheryl’s bedroom - Morning
A young red-head puts her clothes on while she talks on the phone.
Kyle, I got your message from last night. Can we meet tonight after work? You…the message you left really means a lot. Call me. 752-482-6829. [pause] oh, it’s cheryl. bye.
….to be continued.




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