posted in Scenes on Monday - Nov 19 2007

 
 

Wild Justice

He’s a big fluffy thing, trotting ferociously on the grass like its an enemy.

Storyboard of the dog

The approach is unexpected; his familiar naiveté gone for this encounter. A surety and belying wry grin in its place as he steps into his opponent’s territory.

He flips suddenly in a reverse maneuver, forcing the thick of his back into the ground. Back and forth. Over and over.

Storyboard of the dog

Round and round he bowls over the perp. He’s snuffing the bastard out slowly…painfully.

What justice would there be in a quick demise? He’s learned they are purified in the fire of punishment.

Hard lessons during Ralph’s time as a tot taught him the value of enjoying the process. It is not the end that counts but the means.

How can a deserving victim attempt to retaliate in the face of such empowerment?
But just as quickly as the approach had come, so does the executioner take his leave.

He is beckoned by a higher power.
The orb that defies gravity soars beyond his reach and he must run to consult with it.

Storyboard of the dog

The blue deity is ground bound but a moment before Ralph lifts it from its intended resting place for the warmth and wetness of his mouth. What shall they discuss this evening?

Ralph considers the purpose of the divine intervention. He mulls over the reasons with two-hundred pounds of pressure exercised on his instructor.

But the Ball of Life is eternal. Ralph may be the Ball’s left hand of justice but even he cannot eliminate the fire burning inside.

There is justification for Ralph to take the ball in his mouth. The jaws illicit truth and clarity for the executioner.

His answer retrieved, Ralph allows the right hand of deity - the white phantom - to reassume his position as keeper of the Ball.

Ralph approaches his previous destination, inspecting the ground closely for the enemy’s exact location.
Storyboard of the dog

He squats and delivers his final judgment having found the swine hiding in the thick blades of grass.

He digs at the surrounding area, smiting onlookers for their evil curiosity. The white phantom perceives the end of things and requests Ralph’s acquaintance.

A meaty incentive completes the deed. It is finished.
The dog gets a treat

 

posted in Business, Creativity on Friday - Aug 3 2007

 
 

The shooting stars among us

Towering genius disdains a beaten path
It seeks regions hitherto unexplored
It scorns to tread in the footsteps of any predecessor however illustrious
It thirsts and burns for distinction

- A. Lincoln (age 29)

 

posted in Business, Ideas on Tuesday - Jul 31 2007

 
 

The method elsewhere

First off, my sincere apologies to all my avid readers (I know there are at least two of you…I think) for my long absence. Storyrules will regain momentum in the coming months now that a few larger life issues that cropped up this past season are mostly out of the way. I won’t tell you what these are because privacy is important - especially with the way Google and the government are trying to capture my online essence with its massive feelers and use it for their own greedy purposes - but let’s just say they include ‘buying a condo’, ‘DIY renovation on said condo’ and ‘changing jobs’. Yes, life will continue.

But I must share the following:
Idea City - the blog of marketing/advertising shop GSD&M - wrote about a post by Farming Phronesis which attempts to apply basic principles of the Method to strategic planning. Ah ha, vindication at last. Well, not so much but it is certainly an interesting read. It is actually true then; ideas are never truly unique. They are simply plucked from the cloud of abstraction by curious, watchful travelers of life. Pretentious? You may as well call the thing what it is.

Excerpt:
1) Be your target group. Dress like them, act like them, go where they go, listen what they listen to, eat what they eat, watch what they watch, read what they read…you get my point.

 

posted in Creativity, Ideas on Friday - Jun 22 2007

 
 

Finding inspiration in art

Its no secret that creators of something from nothing regularly take inspiration and cues from art, among other things. That is why I must share with you the fantastic collection of images from the Division of Rare and Manuscript Collections of Cornell University Library - The Fantastic in Art & Fiction.

Drawn! recently posted about this and it is an amazing reference.

You’ll find hundreds of rare illustrations and inscriptions of demons, devils, and other fantastic creatures.

Rolleston - Demon Bursting Angel Blown Bubbles

 

posted in Stream of Consciousness, Random on Wednesday - Jun 20 2007

 
 

Imagine the possibilities

Staring back when we stare up,
Stars store hope that the truly great things
Have yet to come.

NOTE: pretty words from a pretty boy are positively pointless

 

posted in Method Writing on Monday - Jun 4 2007

 
 

In Absentia

Storyrules has gone without attention for some three fortnights and will continue to be so for the next several days. In my absence, please check out the wonderful cartooning and illustration blog Drawn!

 

posted in Film & TV, Scenes on Thursday - May 17 2007

 
 

Aleria: Leadership training in Vorago

Every six years, ten of the most skilled and promising Alerians are chosen by the leaders of Aleria - the Descendants - to learn the secrets of Aleria’s foundation and to become leaders of the next generation. No requirements exist except demonstrated skill and leadership in the face of extreme adversity. By accepting the offer, inductees must leave Aleria for Vorago, the ice-submerged ruined city on the far west side of the Land of Ice and Water. It was once the most developed and expansive city. Now it is the domain of unseen evil and scavengers of the weak and injured. A walled complex was built above the city by the Descendants. It is the only Alerian outpost this far west and it is home to this group of Alerian trainees for the next year. The training’s promise is an unlocking of the secrets of the body, mind, heart and, by extension, society.

EXT. ICE AND ROCK PLATEAU - DUSK - VORAGO
A young girl with skin and hair to match the ice rests her back against a stone in ice. She settles in quietly to listen to the conversation that is taking place less than three-hundred paces out. A group of outsiders - approximately twelve - are seated in a circle listening to a tall creature who stands at least five feet up, on air apparently, and speaks with a deep sound from the center of the circle. She can’t place his accent. Where are these things from? She leans in to listen.

MENTOR
What is there in this world that is worthy of your passion? Is it work? Achievement in commerce? Art? Love? Faith? Should passion be carefully portioned out to a precious few endeavors? Does anything deserve its unbridled fervor?

He turns slowly to face the other half of the circle.

MENTOR (cont.)
Where are the reasons for your passion? Can it be possible that without introspection and analysis of why we do what we do, that we give passion away for free; to anyone or anything that shows even the slightest interest? If you are honest, you will admit that you have run this race before. Now realize the danger you are capable of. Passion without understanding can easily be placed in the service of evil. Your mind will know what is right but your passion will twist it to an unrecognizable abstraction. Therefore, true leaders must consider their purpose in relation to those they mean to lead and the role their passion must play in this. That is why we are here.

The MENTOR bends down to touch the ice and rock beneath them all. He burns a sign on the ground with a finger and rises further. He speaks from the air, several lengths of men up. The girl silently scrambles into her hole in order to avoid being seen.

Land of Ice and Water Guy - Tonal Example

MENTOR (cont.)
Consider what powers flow in your veins. What abilities for genius lie waiting to be exposed? What is it in you that rises to meet any occasion you choose to care about, regardless of innate ability? What is this thing that propels you to action and guarantees your success despite all odds? Where does it come from? Are you using it properly? Without understanding passion you are certainly ignoring it’s full potential.

He returns to the ground and sits with the group.

WHARF
It’s ambition. Ambition to achieve drives passion. When I want something bad enough you can bet your ass I’m gonna be passionate about it. The real question is what reason exists that creates ambition in the first place? I’ll give you that answer. And I’ll give you the bitter taste that comes with it too. Ambition is driven by boredom. It’s certainly not an inborn characteristic like you say, with all due respect. I’ve seen the way the creatures out here live. They are the rawest, most instinctual things. But once they’ve got a place to live, food and good company what else is left? What else do we have left? Ambition. Then passion, when ambition gets old.

MENTOR
Ambition is not our concern. Rather, it is a measure of passion’s potential. Ambition is a mirror to reflect our self-understanding and desires. But it is not created by boredom. These creatures, as you call them, are just like you and me. They have passion. They just don’t trust themselves or their environment enough to try it out.

RARE
Is there a way to free it and to let it run its course; a track with no end except that which our heart and soul can no longer take? How do you become something more without a place to try?

MENTOR
Okay. Shall we test passion then? Shall we reason it out as WHARF would have it? Who knows what logic governs the stuff of the heart? You can kill passion by searching for its reason. But is it really just here to provide for our satisfaction and enjoyment?

KATERINE
Aye. I have felt the thirst for it; a selfish, wild and unquenchable thirst for more.

Several of the others nod.

MENTOR
Is that the goal of passion’s existence? Does passion exist simply to guide us to that which makes us happy? Is passion a choice then? Simply a tool to use and misuse as we choose? Think on these questions. You don’t need answers; just an acceptance of the ambiguity and knowledge of the power free will holds over your future and the future of our world. We’re starting to understand why the world needs Aleria. Take it and go now.Land of Ice and Water Character - Tonal example

The pale girl is still while the group leaves the plateau. She cries silently and considers all that has been said. A thick black oily rain falls from the sky, sliding slowly off her skin in streaks. Her whole body seems to cry. Finally, she crawls back down the hole to return to her family. She plans to return.

 

posted in Random, Scenes on Saturday - Apr 28 2007

 
 

Yer everyday western

A calm span of sand and dirt in a desert canyon is disturbed by a teenage boy running frantically. He stops at the river and pants as he looks down the path he’d come by. Blood pours from one eye and he pulls a gun out from its holster. He waits. Moments later the sheriff shows up. He ducks behind a tree and pulls out his own gun.

Sheriff
Shoulder that gun fella. You got the draw on me but I’m a quicker shot. Plus, yer missin’ an eye. You ain’t got a chanc’a comin’ near me in yer state. Come on now. Lemme gatcha over to miss lori’s for some help.

Boy
An then what’ll happen sheriff? You gonna let me get on my way? Clean?

The Sheriff nods.

Boy cont…
I bet you will.

Sheriff
Tell you what boy, put that there putter down an I’ll bring you in fer sum help. Keep it up and I’ll shoot’chya. Fair deal?

The boy nods and slowly lowers the gun to the ground. As soon as the gun is pointed down, the sheriff plants a bullet right in the urchin’s temple. He crumples to the road in a cloud of dirt. The echo of the shot rings off the walls of the canyon. The sheriff grabs the boy’s gun from his hand.

Son of a Gun by Wicked SonSheriff
Right shame.

He tucks the gun in his pants and searches the boy’s body for the bag of bank money he had stolen. The Sheriff weighs it using his left hand as a scale and tucks it in his pants. Then he unpins his badge, tosses it in the river and leaves.

 

posted in Provocation, Scenes on Thursday - Apr 26 2007

 
 

Provocation: Cannibalism is okay

Introduction to Provocation: A crazy idea is taken seriously and used as the basis for a scene or story.

–Provocation: Cannibalism is a perfectly normal practice, like vegetarianism. What cannibalism needs is a farm bill to subsidize farmers of organically fed people for practicing cannibals.–

The Senate has just began session. Cameras surround the perimeter. Joseph, a reporter for CNN, stands anticipating next to his camera. The excited tension in his breath fogs the lens and he doesn’t notice.Vegetarian by Queen of Hearts at DeviantART

SPEAKER
The Senator from Massachusetts has the floor.

MA SENATOR

Thank you Speaker. Distinguished colleagues of the Senate and friends, today we bring before you a truly historic bill. With your yay vote this day, you become aligned with the right part of history in confirming the strength of our constitution and the effectiveness of our laws. We are a government of the people, by the people and the people have spoken. [Applause] The People-farm Subsidy is not just a support system for an industry that is experiencing enormous pressure from world-wide competition. It is an affirmation that the United States of America will protect the basic human right to choose no matter what our neighbors think. [applause] We are a country governed by one principle before any other - we will do whatever we can as government officials to please the people and make them feel good so that we don’t lose our jobs, even if it goes against our personal beliefs of what right and wrong are. [laughter] Just wanted to see if you were still with me.

The truth is that people-farming had been going on for years on a black market in the United States and abroad. Until the recent Supreme Court ruling in favor of legalizing cannibalism, people-farming on the black market created dangerous conditions for those taking part in it and for consumers, without any scrutiny on the quality of service or product. Those with an eye toward taking advantage of an unwatched system exploited their consumers by delivering badly taken care of, unhealthy product often laced with dangerous drugs. One in ten consumers either died or had life-long complications as a result of this unsafe environment for cannibalism.

Look, I don’t personally agree with it. As a Catholic, its against my belief system. But I could not in good conscience exercise my own personal beliefs on the whole of the United States and watch those who choose to take part suffer as a result.

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posted in Storytelling, Scenes on Wednesday - Apr 25 2007

 
 

Fearing change

Jon was a poor man in a rich city. But he didn’t blame them. Life holds a different secret for each of us and the actions we take decide whether we ever find out what it is. Jon made the wrong decisions. He screwed himself and now he thinks he missed the only chance he had. He wanders around with no reason to care. Jon stares at the couples in the park and wonders why it can’t be him. Sometimes he walks right through a couple holding hands just to feel what its like. He doesn’t spit on them or curse them out. HeRush Hour by shamusmcdougal just wants to be a part of it.

But he will never be a part of it. He won’t even take the first step to get there. He can’t let himself take that risk. Something in his heart has shut his brain off and he can’t see himself as anything other than what he is. Everyday he does the same thing. Everyday he expects different results. He tells people that he’s trying. He doesn’t really care, though.

Jon should just hide away in some cardboard box, kill himself and be done with it. Who’d miss him after all? He sees the way people look at him. They know he’s a waste of skin. But what he doesn’t see is that he is just the same as a lot of those people he watches sitting in the park in suits with a 12-inch Subway on their lap. They do the same thing everyday, wish they could be a little more free and want anything other than what they are. Jon can’t let himself see it or expect anything more out of life though. If he did, that would change everything and he’d take a risk that he isn’t used to taking.

Jon is a homeless man with the world waiting on him. All he needs to do is choose to take that first step. Anything must be better than what he is. He won’t do it. Yesterday he asked a student sitting outside for fifty cents. The kid gave him a dollar instead and asked him to put it to good use. Jon said thank you and left. He didn’t realize how lucky he just was. He found the one person who might have actually seen him for the person that he is. And he didn’t think anything of it. Jon used the dollar to buy a coffee. He sat at that Starbucks with his coffee for six hours. Finally they kicked him out. He didn’t blame them. He’s just a guy who’s given up on life. He’s wasting his own skin. He should just get it over with.

Lazy Raccoon by Artificiosus01

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